textual changes to sc22 event workshop

Signed-off-by: Toshaan Bharvani <toshaan@vantosh.com>

content/events/adgsc22.md

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-title: "OpenPOWER ADG Super Computing 22"
+title: "Super Computing 22 OpenPOWER ADG Workshop"
 eventdates:
   from: 2022-11-12
-eventplace: "Dallas,Texas - USA"
+eventplace: "Dallas, Texas, USA"
 #callforpresentation:
 register: https://registration.openpower.foundation/academic/ADGSC22/
 #schedule:
@@ -13,8 +13,10 @@ date: 2022-08-26
 draft: false
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-Distinguished academic  experts and Industry leaders will speak/present on AI,HPC and Cloud  topics, including, current problems and technical challenges in their areas of research. This Workshop will foster open collaboration between industry and academia, led by the OpenPOWER foundation , OpenPOWER partners and IBM to address current challenges and open problems in Chip Design , AI,HPC and Cloud
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+Distinguished academic experts and industry leaders will speak and present on AI, HPC and Cloud topics, including,
+current problems and technical challenges in their areas of research.
 
+This workshop will foster open collaboration between industry and academia, led by the OpenPOWER foundation.
+The OpenPOWER partners, such as IBM and others, will address current challenges and problems in Open Chip Design, AI, HPC and Cloud.
 
 {{< prereg organizer="academic" event="ADGSC22" >}}